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stuart
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since 1999-11-05
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0 posted 1999-11-05 11:14 PM


FIRST SIGHT


The first time I saw you standing there,
Time had stopped, for a moment, a stare…
Your eyes so bright, so wonderful, so true
I melted at first sight of seeing you.

How can this be, a woman of beauty known of no other
She walks into my life as a breeze of summer.
Her smile brings joy to those around
With kindness and care that leaps abound.

How does this happen to one at all?
I wonder and ponder hoping time will stall.
What potion does she have, what spell, what pill?
A woman whose shear presence can bend my will.

Now that I have stepped forward to see it through,
I look forward to being alone with you.
In thoughts I have, in dreams at night
Ever since I’ve had that very first sight.

© Copyright 1999 stuart - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
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That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-11-05 11:18 PM


This is so sweet...

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



stuart
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since 1999-11-05
Posts 14
Cincinnati, OH
2 posted 1999-11-05 11:35 PM


I wrote this for a newly found "friend".. thanks for your comment.
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
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3 posted 1999-11-06 01:46 AM


Lovely....Well done!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Denise
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4 posted 1999-11-06 06:26 PM


Sounds like love to me!

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Denise


stuart
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since 1999-11-05
Posts 14
Cincinnati, OH
5 posted 1999-11-06 06:48 PM


Denise,
She's quite remarkable!
I truly hope so.
Stuart

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-04-25 09:07 PM


very touching
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