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at first sight
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at first sight |
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stuart Junior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 14Cincinnati, OH |
FIRST SIGHT The first time I saw you standing there, Time had stopped, for a moment, a stare… Your eyes so bright, so wonderful, so true I melted at first sight of seeing you. How can this be, a woman of beauty known of no other She walks into my life as a breeze of summer. Her smile brings joy to those around With kindness and care that leaps abound. How does this happen to one at all? I wonder and ponder hoping time will stall. What potion does she have, what spell, what pill? A woman whose shear presence can bend my will. Now that I have stepped forward to see it through, I look forward to being alone with you. In thoughts I have, in dreams at night Ever since I’ve had that very first sight. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
This is so sweet...  ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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stuart Junior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 14Cincinnati, OH |
I wrote this for a newly found "friend".. thanks for your comment. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Lovely....Well done!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like love to me! ------------------ Denise |
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stuart Junior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 14Cincinnati, OH |
Denise, She's quite remarkable! I truly hope so. Stuart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching |
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