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Lighthouse |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Lighthouse As the wind swept clouds across a thoughtless mind and as wave after wave crashed upon feelings... the lighthouse stood watch a beacon for those lost at sea. And when the eyes cleared to reveal a starlit night for guidance to navigate around an impending mood... the lighthouse still stands watch a beacon for ships lost in me. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very nicely done...I love lighthouses, the sea and the fog.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very nice!!!  |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Loved the images ....Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thank you all....that was written for a friend...lots of symbolism in it....not much to do with lighthouses!!!! :-} RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply lovely! I not only love the sea, lighthouses, the beach, the waves, etc. I love symbolism using them! ------------------ Denise |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Oh Denise....I was so worried tht Mike had stolen you away from me!!!!!!!! I warned him!!! ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
hehehehehehehe!!! ------------------ Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sometimes I wish I had a light house in me. This was well done and I liked the symbolism. The last four lines were great! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks Martie....we all have a lighthouse in us.....we do. ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ya know, i'm glad you said it was more than a lighthouse. Cause when I read this it was deep! I got a spiritual message out of this. Very well written! Very deep thoughts. I really like this one!!!! |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Lovely Robert...I too felt the spiritual essence of this message. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I adore the ocean and all things ocean-Y  great poem! I get what you mean too, sometimes I feel like that! (Lots of times) Take care X ------------------ "We have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night" (Tombstone epitaph of two amateur astronomers) |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
thanks X!!!! glad you know!!! ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wow....going back to the archives is akin to finding sunken treasures..... worthy of a repost, Robert.... |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks sunshine!!! I probably have reposted!!! wow...open poetry #3....so long ago!! |
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