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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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WhtDove, I want to thank you for all the help you have given me in putting this poem together. Thank you Angel  I Miss You! My tenderness, my love Sent to me from above. You are my special one Shining like the sun Bringing out my emotions I drown within your oceans I miss you everyday How much I cannot say I want to touch your heart So tenderness won't part You bring joy to my day Please don't ever go away Holding you in warm embrace Caressing your Angelic face. Your sweet lips I'll devour Each second and each hour Missing you more than you'll know May our love forever grow. Where you are I want to be Only you it is I see. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
This is awesome DA. You write so beautifully. Huggs, Moonshine. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Your welcome D.A! Glad you decided on that one line. Turned out great! ;o) |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Awwww so sweet...Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Moonshine, I thank you so very much for your lovely comments. ((((HUGS))))-------------- WhtDove, I've said it before and I'll say it again, you truly are an Angel ((((HUGS)))) Thank you so much!  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Watcher, thank you so much ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This poem is simply beautiful DA and I really enjoyed the read.....infact I am saving this in my 'Best Poetry File'.... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Simply beautiful DA.Good on ya mate! ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply quite beautiful! ------------------ Denise |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
What beauty...I can definitely relate. Exellent job!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all very much, but I did not do this on my own. Whtdve helped me complete it and without her it would not have been this beautiful. Thank You Thanks again WhtDove ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
D.A. thanks girl! You're welcome for the help you really are. It is beautiful! They were your thoughts all I did was re-arrange the words! [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 11-06-1999).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautifully done |
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