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Mike
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since 1999-06-19
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0 posted 1999-11-05 03:06 PM


As I drift alone within this crowded room,
I float in isolation, foregoing contemplation,
Unfettered by reflections that entomb.

Amongst the mindless valleys I do soar,
On feathered wings of hawk, I hear the mountains talk,
Calling out in introspection I implore.

Escape from cloistered prisons of the mind,
Adrift upon the wind, across the sky I wend,
Free at last from formless shackles that do bind.

Fears of strife that no more loom,
For I sought my soul to free, I found serenity,
Unfettered by reflections that entomb.

For I sought my soul to free, I found serenity,
Upon the tranquil sea, I found ubiquity.

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 11-05-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-11-05 07:06 PM


Oh, Mike this is so lovely! It gave me a smooth peaceful feeling! Great job!

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Denise


RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
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2 posted 1999-11-05 07:11 PM


Mike this is wonderful!!!! I simply love it.

PS: please don't take Denise from me with your wonderful words!!!!

Robert

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Denise
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3 posted 1999-11-05 07:34 PM


Robert- Not to worry-I have room for EVERYBODY'S wonderful words!

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Denise


Watcher666
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4 posted 1999-11-05 09:13 PM


Simply lovely!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-04-25 09:15 PM


smooth!
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