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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
As I drift alone within this crowded room, I float in isolation, foregoing contemplation, Unfettered by reflections that entomb. Amongst the mindless valleys I do soar, On feathered wings of hawk, I hear the mountains talk, Calling out in introspection I implore. Escape from cloistered prisons of the mind, Adrift upon the wind, across the sky I wend, Free at last from formless shackles that do bind. Fears of strife that no more loom, For I sought my soul to free, I found serenity, Unfettered by reflections that entomb. For I sought my soul to free, I found serenity, Upon the tranquil sea, I found ubiquity. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 11-05-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Mike this is so lovely! It gave me a smooth peaceful feeling! Great job! ------------------ Denise |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Mike this is wonderful!!!! I simply love it. PS: please don't take Denise from me with your wonderful words!!!! Robert ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Robert- Not to worry-I have room for EVERYBODY'S wonderful words!  ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Simply lovely! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
smooth! |
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