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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin

0 posted 1999-11-04 03:39 AM


My life consumed by hurt and pain
when will it all reform?
I'm happy and I know no vain
but yet this hurts me more

I know its gone, I want it still
please send someone for me
this hole in my heart, she would fill
someone to set me free

So much love I have to give
yet nobody wants to know
so much life I want to live
yet no-one for me to show

Why are people so scared of love?
I'll never understand
more beautiful than a snow white dove
how can such a thing be "damned"??

More magic it seems, than life itself
yet so many run away
so tragic for me, I'd give myself
seems no-one hears my plea

Truthful, honest, kind and pure
this is my love for taking
some-one to hold, to just be near
to stop me from this shaking

I want to love, I want to need
I want to know again
for something real, dear Lord I plead
my love would know no ends

This emptiness is getting old
I need to love again
the truth is open to unfold
just look inside my friend

I thought I knew what true love was
I guess I didnt see
why you ask? oh, just because
now no-one's here with me

My love was real, or so I think
I guess I'll never know
cause it was gone in just a blink
why? I will never know

Unless it goes both ways, no "stops"
its just a "thing" I feel
I'm sorry if I held no "blocks"
but to me it was quite real

I ache, I hurt, I long for more
I search, I try to find
cant buy this "need" in any store
my emptiness defined.

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be

© Copyright 1999 B.J.Howe - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-04 03:44 AM


Beautifully expressed....well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
2 posted 1999-11-04 07:58 AM


Well Done Thunder! I can feel the longing in this piece.....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
3 posted 1999-11-04 08:12 AM


Nicely done Thunder....
ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
4 posted 1999-11-04 11:00 PM


Watcher666.... Thank you, Watcher
Pepper........ Thanks to you... So can I LOL ... What can we do but WAIT??
Toerag........ Much thanks to you as well, greatly appreciate your comments.

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be

suthern
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
5 posted 1999-11-05 01:29 PM


Well done, Thunder... may your wait be a short one. *S*
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2004-04-18 10:11 PM


you are missed
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