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Emptiness" Defined.
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Emptiness" Defined. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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My life consumed by hurt and pain when will it all reform? I'm happy and I know no vain but yet this hurts me more I know its gone, I want it still please send someone for me this hole in my heart, she would fill someone to set me free So much love I have to give yet nobody wants to know so much life I want to live yet no-one for me to show Why are people so scared of love? I'll never understand more beautiful than a snow white dove how can such a thing be "damned"?? More magic it seems, than life itself yet so many run away so tragic for me, I'd give myself seems no-one hears my plea Truthful, honest, kind and pure this is my love for taking some-one to hold, to just be near to stop me from this shaking I want to love, I want to need I want to know again for something real, dear Lord I plead my love would know no ends This emptiness is getting old I need to love again the truth is open to unfold just look inside my friend I thought I knew what true love was I guess I didnt see why you ask? oh, just because now no-one's here with me My love was real, or so I think I guess I'll never know cause it was gone in just a blink why? I will never know Unless it goes both ways, no "stops" its just a "thing" I feel I'm sorry if I held no "blocks" but to me it was quite real I ache, I hurt, I long for more I search, I try to find cant buy this "need" in any store my emptiness defined. ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautifully expressed....well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Well Done Thunder! I can feel the longing in this piece..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nicely done Thunder.... |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Watcher666.... Thank you, Watcher  Pepper........ Thanks to you... So can I  LOL ... What can we do but WAIT??Toerag........ Much thanks to you as well, greatly appreciate your comments. ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done, Thunder... may your wait be a short one. *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are missed |
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