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spoongirl28
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since 1999-10-24
Posts 27
FWB, FL USA

0 posted 1999-11-04 03:03 AM


Chased by dreams
Caught by life
Knowing now
To move on.
I am beautiful
I have selfworth
Deserving more
You are gone.
Life will grow better
Things will be hard
Fighting anger
No longer sad.
Neither of you right
Or good for me
I'm letting go
Of feelings bad.
I'm number one
With my girls
We will survive
Together.
I need no one
But them
Stay true to myself
Forever.
Chased by dreams
Caught by life
Knowing now
To move on.
I have decided
To do this
For I know now
I AM STRONG.


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Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-04 03:09 AM


Good for you!!! WELL DONE!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
2 posted 1999-11-04 05:37 PM


You're right! I'm buoyed by your tenacity and will to drive on.

Well struck, wordsmith.

DB

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When I'm sad she comes to me
With a thousand smiles, she gives to me free.
--------Hendrix

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
3 posted 1999-11-04 05:37 PM


You're right! I'm buoyed by your tenacity and will to drive on.

Well struck, wordsmith.

DB

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When I'm sad she comes to me
With a thousand smiles, she gives to me free.
--------Hendrix

[This message has been edited by Deep Blue Me (edited 11-04-1999).]

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
4 posted 1999-11-04 05:38 PM


You're right! I'm buoyed by your tenacity and will to drive on.

Well struck, wordsmith.

DB

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When I'm sad she comes to me
With a thousand smiles, she gives to me free.
--------Hendrix

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
5 posted 1999-11-04 05:40 PM


You're right! I'm buoyed by your tenacity and will to drive on.

Well struck, wordsmith.

DB

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When I'm sad she comes to me
With a thousand smiles, she gives to me free.
--------Hendrix

Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
6 posted 1999-11-04 05:45 PM


I like the strong confidence you show of self.....Great work....thanks for sharing and Welcome to Passions Spoongirl

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

7 posted 1999-11-04 10:43 PM


Chased by dreams
Caught by life

I like that very much! Great message in this!
And welcome to Passions!

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Denise


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
8 posted 2004-04-18 10:12 PM


we need more of these kinds of writes here
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