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Dolphins3
Member

since 1999-09-30

Posts 135
Wisconsin

0 posted 1999-11-03 02:42 PM

Leaving my side
I have no place to hide
Left naked and alone
Cold to the bone
Hurting so bad
Always feeling sad

This is what you did to me
What do you want?
Me to beg and plea
Sorry but I have my diginity.

It may be the only thing left
Without it I would be sent a drift
So I cling to it with all my might
Holding on ever so tight.

Knowing that someday
Everthing will be alright
Because I held on tight.

Judas
Junior Member

since 1999-11-01

Posts 10
Milwaukee,Wi

1 posted 1999-11-03 04:29 PM

Excellent work. I wish I shared your strength.

Dolphins3
Member

since 1999-09-30

Posts 135
Wisconsin

2 posted 1999-11-03 05:23 PM

Judas Thank you. I'm sure you have as much strength as I do. We tend to find it when we need it .

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 1999-11-03 05:32 PM

Excellent piece

Glad you can fight back too..

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

4 posted 1999-11-03 06:25 PM

LOVELY PIECE....May you alwyas have the strength to hold yourself up as you begin to fall.

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NOT IN VAIN
If I can stop one heart from breaking
I shall not live in vain;
If I can ease one life
from aching,
Or cool one pain,
Or help one fainting robin
Into his nest again,
I shall not live in vain.
~Emily Dickinson

[This message has been edited by Lynn (edited 11-03-1999).]

Dolphins3
Member

since 1999-09-30

Posts 135
Wisconsin

5 posted 1999-11-03 07:50 PM

Thank you Isis & Lynn . I'm glad you liked the poem.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 1999-11-03 08:11 PM

Great poem, great attitude!

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Denise

Dolphins3
Member

since 1999-09-30

Posts 135
Wisconsin

7 posted 1999-11-03 08:13 PM

Thank You Denise =)

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

8 posted 1999-11-04 09:43 AM

Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-04-25 05:08 PM

very strong write

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