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God's Masterpiece
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God's Masterpiece |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
You should come and see my mountain, I wish I still lived there. It's down in Alabama, Beauty beyond compare. Leaves of many colors, God's beauty extraordinaire, Nature's glory showing, For all of us to share. Chameleon's can change color, Lilacs turn from green to blue, But Fall brings out how nature, Can change green to glorious hues. There's little that can compare, To what our eyes can see, There's nothing you can purchase anywhere, That God gives us for free. Kodak cannot reproduce, The colors that he'll show ya, Nor can a box of simple crayons, Those offered from Crayola. Colors hallucinogenic, But no drugs you have to take, Just look down off my mountain top, God's splendor can't be faked! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
There are times, my dear friend, when your talent simply takes my breath away... if your mountain is as beautiful as this poem, it's an incredible sight... Well done! I almost expected to look out my window and see the splendor you described.  [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 11-03-1999).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Good paint, nice job well done. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A beautiful tribute to the wonders of nature. I think I have a mountain that's similar--cause the feelings sure are. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
hmmmmmm, I do have a beautiful mountain, right outside my window, but fail to "see" it sometimes, thank you for the blessing of your vision, very beautifully done my friend |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Iloveit...We all have a beautiful "mountain' or something....It's just taking the time to notice I think. Life passes by so quickly now a days...we just don't stop to notice...yanno? |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Wonderful imagery Toe! A lovely piece...... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Beautiful mountains there Toe. We've got some nice ones around here too, but unfortunately most of the time we seem to lose them to the smog. Again, well done. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You are still on a mountain, Toe. It's a mountain of talent for making people laugh and feel good about things...and that ain't no small hill of beans! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I did see it...thanks to your masterpiece! ------------------ Denise |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You may be the world's largest smartass(as you professed to me) but you have an amazing character Sir. To be able to really see and appreciate a spectacular view such as this, you have to have character. Thankyou for this my friend. |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Alabama...Alabama...Oh Sweet...Alabama. We do have a beautiful fall season. But so does all of Gods beutiful creation called "EARTH"...Beautiful poem Toe! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You're doing some nice painting there yourself Toe ------------------ Alis volat propriis |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
good one toe rag!! Cheaha, I bet...:-))) HA |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Truly Beautiful....liked this one much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I thank each and every one of you for the nice words...It means alot to me! |
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misterpoet Junior Member
since 1999-10-26
Posts 18 |
wouldn't change a thing. breaktaking! thanks for inking such words. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Toe you leave me in awe! This was truly beautiful buddy! Awesome work from you. A little inspiration there? |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A beautiful poem and a wonderful message behind it, Toe. Thank you. Michael |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is one time when Balladeer couldn't bear to be "mean" to you, Toe... *G* And his words are so true... You don't just give laughter, though you give that generously. You leave words like this... for when a soul needs a brief vacation. Thank you, dear friend... it is so lovely! |
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