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Deliverance |
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aaron sanchez New Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 7N/A |
what love can discord flow that such things as life, love, and hate be brought down so low? wretched, oh cursed feeling that causes empire's to fall and king's to lose sanity. in vengeance, complete our sorrow, and wilt, o rose of mine heart, to burn this love from out of my soul. tainted! oh, how tainted! cursed and blind am i to not see it sooner, that i love you, i love you. what sort of actions derive this meaning and affection? effected infection of hateful lust; affection derived from salted dust. to dust i'll return, dust that with evil burns, burn for despised love, despised hate and concerned pride. burn me. oh fire, touch my eyes so that they may but see and soak my heart in kerosene so it but may be purified. oh, villian! villian! i call you villian! evil before man! angels and ministers of grace have no intelligence in the matter! only through faith, through bloodshed, can my soul be saved from cursed fire and wretched feeling. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I really like this....I like the way it was written. Nice.  ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful! ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enjoyed the read...Nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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aaron sanchez New Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 7N/A |
thanx all for the encouragement aaron |
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