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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
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northern mountains, Idaho

0 posted 1999-11-03 11:22 AM




Precise as butterfly wings

Quick as fireflies

Delicate as goose-down

Floating ...

Tickling up and down my spine

Gently - tenderly -

Taking your time -

Like your lovemaking ...

Your guitar singing to me ...



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...Living is ever like crossing rivers; finding a new life on each shore ... RJG

© Copyright 1999 Rosemary J. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
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1 posted 1999-11-03 11:25 AM


Simply lovely!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
2 posted 1999-11-03 11:28 AM


Yanno, Jimmie Hendrix could really finger a guitar....and he played it with his mouth sometimes too....This was very well done Rosie and welcome to Passions....
Denise
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3 posted 1999-11-03 08:03 PM


Very nice, indeed!

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Denise


passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-04-25 09:27 PM


I love the guitar! nice write
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