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Spring Cleaning |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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God knocked at the door of my heart one day and I looked for a place to hide, my soul was cluttered and choked with debris and things were untidy inside. I needed some time to put matters right surprised he would call on me, my soul needed cleaning from bottom to top there were things He should not see. There were tasks neglected, long overdue cobwebs to be brushed from the wall, brothers to love and people to be forgiven I had not expected his call. I stood with my hand on the latch of my hearts door and gazed at the mess in the room, when I opened the door my sould blushed to see God had left on my doorstep---a broom! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Very touching, Melanie.  ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enjoyed this much! Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hey Sweetie, you knew I would like this didn't ya? You're right. Great job and oh so true! This one really hits home with me, cause that's about where I'm at. I need to open the doors and start sweeping the garbage out! HUGS sweet one! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is beautiful Echo |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Amy...Thank you! I do try...sometimes! Watcher...Thank you, glad you liked it! Rebecca...Yeah I thought you would like this one, that's why I told ya about it =) Glad you did like it though! And hey, if you want, I can give ya an extra broom to help *hugs*Ruth...Thank you kindly! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beauitful indeed ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Thank you Isis! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely Echo....I really enjoyed this piece....... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Funny - - we are both in the same shoes! I too am "spring cleaning" my soul...my emotions. This really hit home for me, so I want to say an extra big THANK YOU....you spoke the words for me so I wouldn't have to. I know exactly what you're going through I believe. Chin up girl, I guess we better get busy, huh? Can I borrow your broom when you're done? hehe ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Pepper...Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading! PFF...Yup, I think we better get busy! I think I have an extra broom around here somewhere, cause I know I had one of my own before God gave me another one. Glad you liked it! Thank you for reading!------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 good write! |
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