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My Heart
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My Heart |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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MY HEART GROWS SO WEARY, AS THE HOURS STRETCH TO DAYS. I RELIVE EACH PROMISE, UNFULFILLED, YET STILL YOU MADE. MY HEART GROWS STRONGER, WITH THE PASSING OF TIME. I RELIVE ALL THE GOOD YEARS, WHEN PROUDLY, YOU WERE MINE. MY HEART GROWS SO VERY TENDER, WITH REMEMBRANCE OF YOUR TOUCH. YOU BRANDED ME WITH YOUR FIRE, EVERY TIME THAT WE MADE LOVE. MY HEART STILL GROWS SOMBER, WHEN REMINDED OF HOW YOU CHANGED. FROM THE MAN I FELL IN LOVE WITH, TO THE ONE WHO PLAYED SUCH GAMES. MY HEART, WITH YOU, REGARDLESS, ALWAYS WILL REMAIN. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I like this much. Very beautiful, yet sorrowful. I could feel the passion and hurt in this poem. Very well done! Two thumbs up  ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
With this one you mirrored my heart and soul. Loved it ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
isis- i think i had us both in mind while writing this one. unfortunantly the hurt is never enough for me to move on, instead i stay trapped by his love and the years we have spent together. thank you echo for your comments, each and every one means alot! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Hauntingly beautiful. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice ending |
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