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Was it a dream
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Was it a dream |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Was it a dream Once upon a restless sleep. A restive thought came out the deep. It reap behind my eyes closed numb, And stayed within my mind to steep. A shapeless shape of edgeless sight, A floating specter of the night. A forming figure standing glum, An awesome sight of random slight. Careless free as in oversee. And dressed in striking grey pongee, Sent a numb that struck me dumb And silently come at me. I tried so hard to speak, relate, With open arms commiserate. I felt my mind in warm succumb, In haunting silent patient wait. He waved me back in quiet mime And whispered me it's not your time. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This was absolutely chilling. What a nightmare this was....or was it? **eerie,spooky music playing in the background, and a couple of rattling chains for good measure** Most excellent, Seymour!  ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Excellent! Enjoyed this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
BRAVO!!! Seymore, this was wonderful....you have a gift dear man |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Another awesome venture, Sy.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denice, So kind of you to read and comment on this poem. thank you so much. Whatcher, Glad you liked this spooky poem, thanks for the comment. Hoot, Bravo is a wonderful acknowledgment of this poem. I thank you much. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very chilling indeed!! Loved the read Sy........ ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done, Seymour... (shivering) *G* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You are so good at capturing a mood Seymour. Great poem! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Nothing ventured nothing gained. *L* Pepper, Thank you for the read and comment. Suthern, Thank you for the shivering well done. Martie, Capturing a mood, thank you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You should know I dib the wierder dreams! Good one Sy, enjoyed as always! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Just want to thank you before this one fades away. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Another wonderful creation friend Another word for chilling please ? ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Isis, Thank you so much for the read and comment. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Ooh, spooky... ------------------ Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Alright this sounds like a near death experience or something??? Well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lizzy, One of my favorites, thank you. WhtDove, Thank you for the well done. |
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