Open Poetry #3 |
As An Angel Flies Away |
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very few are the people who can always make you smile. The ones who, no matter what, seem to make it all worthwhile. When God sends down an Angel, indeed, one should praise that day, Cause not much is left as an Angel flies away. You thought she'd always be there as she had been for so long. Her words were softly spoken but her emotion, so strong. Her caring was so evident in every last word she'd say, But who's left to care as an Angel flies away? Her friendship is a treasure, one that I will ever trust. But her tears are my reminder that Time turns all to dust. Standing here, in what was her home, leaves me in disarray. Cause all I can do is cry as our Angel flies away. Heather, you will be greatly missed. ------------------ Michael Anderson [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 11-02-1999).] |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
My heart breaks with the reading of this and with the thought of your penning it my friend. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Very Beautiful. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful Michael, yet very sad. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very beautiful, Michael... and very sad. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Simply a beautiful treasure my friend! Well spoken! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well done (of course) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Michael, Well you broke my heart too and that's not easy to do. A wonderful poem. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
So beautiful. Jenny |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is so sad Michael |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
My heart too cries...for I know how much she means to you. This is beautiful Michael, I know she will love it.... ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
So beautiful, so sad...... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Beautiful Michael.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well its been said before, but let me add mine too, beautiful but sad, really nice work Michael |
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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
This is beautiful Michael. My heart weep's for your loss. ------------------ Thy own Darkness shall conquer the Light |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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