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One Voice (acrostic) |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
One voice for you I swear love will not fail. No one before looked past my stoic veil. Each word from you once again renews trust. Vivaciously vibrant, for you I lust. Others have tried empty words of romance. I am here for you and never by chance. Celebrations of love lifted my curse. Each loving word unlocks my gift for verse. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 10-30-1999).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
nicely done dream yuh she shall love it |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
How beautiful! Lucky she is to have this penned for her  ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Acrostically perfect! And indeed a success... I have a feeling she will treasure this my friend! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Very Well Done Dear Brother!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Oh how wonderful DE... this I know will lighten her soul, as she has lightened you!! No words more beautifully writen my friend! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Beautiful! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
oops! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 10-30-1999).] |
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Serain Junior Member
since 1999-10-16
Posts 17Gresham, OR |
nice mr evil |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well said my friend. I'm sure she will treasure this! |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
A beautiful poem, my friend ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
A beautiful tribute, DreamEvil. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How could anyone not love such a verse? *S* Well done, DE! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Soul-Brother, Absolutley Fabulous!! loved it. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
So beautiful Dream, and so talented you are !! Jenny |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
How I do love to hear you *sing* when you're smitten.....Very beautiful side to you Dream, and also a very beautiful acrostic...one she will treasure always. ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
Beautiful! She is a lucky girl for such devotion. ------------------ Thy own Darkness shall conquer the Light |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 beautiful! |
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