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Blackdrake
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since 1999-07-23
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Depends on the day :)

0 posted 1999-10-29 06:45 PM


He lays upon the floor,
His eyes are filled with greif.
His time upon this earth is done,
Although his time was breif.

He remembers all the fun he had,
Roumping through the trees.
Playing with the other dogs,
And chasing bumble bees.

With auburn eyes and fur of black,
True beauty to behold.
He always had love to give,
He had a heart of gold.

He sits here now beside me,
As i write this down.
But ony i can see him,
For this day he was put down.

In loveing memory of TAZ.
The best dog we ever owned.

©BLACKDRAKE

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Thy own Darkness shall conquer the Light

[This message has been edited by Blackdrake (edited 10-29-1999).]

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tori
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
1 posted 1999-10-29 07:06 PM


BD... I'm heart fully sorry for your loss.
I know the amazing abundance of friendship, entertainment and love a dog can bring
I can see from your words how much you loved Taz.. enough to let go... Peace friend

Denise
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2 posted 1999-10-29 08:28 PM


So sad They are the best friends for sure.

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Denise


Blackdrake
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3 posted 1999-10-29 09:43 PM


Thank you all. I do not mourn the loss of a pet, but the loss of a friend.

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Thy own darkness shall conquer the light

[This message has been edited by Blackdrake (edited 10-30-1999).]

Ominous
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since 1999-07-04
Posts 68
Canada
4 posted 1999-11-01 11:41 PM


I couldn't have put it better myself brother.
This poem tugged at my heart and brought tears to my eyes. Taz truly was family and a friend. He will be greatly missed.

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Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light


Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
5 posted 1999-11-01 11:52 PM



I know exactly how you feel, Black. Baby Girl was 17 when we chose to end her suffering. She died in the lap of someone she loved and trusted. They become a beloved member of the family.

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I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day!

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

6 posted 1999-11-01 11:53 PM


You rock with this tribute my friend.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

7 posted 1999-11-02 01:14 AM


My heart goes out to you! *Hugs*

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
8 posted 1999-11-02 09:48 AM


How sad, pets are such a special part of our lives
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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9 posted 2004-04-25 10:31 PM


sad write
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