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Open Poetry #3

[No Poem Name]

Thunder Moomba
Junior Member

since 1999-10-30

Posts 21
Baldwin Park, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-11-01 07:47 PM

Far Away In the sunshine
Are my highest aspirations.

I may not reach them,
But I can look up and see there beauty.

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Help Me find a poem name for this poem. Im still wodering what to call it. hmmm

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Jr. Rodrigo M. Daz_

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-11-01 07:56 PM

So - why can't you reach them?
As it is a short piece I think the first two words are nice as a title.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-11-01 10:00 PM

Well...would this be a poem that you wrote, I would gladly help you with a name!! BUT!! Since it happens to be a quote by Lousia May Alcott, I don't think you should take credit for it.
The actual quote reads...and I do quote:
"Far away, there in the sunshine are my highest aspirations. I may not reach them but I can look up and see their beauty, believe in them and try to follow them." ~Lousia May Alcott

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 1999-11-01 10:14 PM

TM - You're a new member, so perhaps you didn't understand that these forums are intended for the postings of your "original" work?

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