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Open Poetry #3

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Judas
Junior Member

since 1999-11-01

Posts 10
Milwaukee,Wi

0 posted 1999-11-01 06:08 PM

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I have waited
for the day
that never came.
Like a flower
without the rain,
our love was left
to wither away
in the harsh misery
of an unending day.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-01 06:12 PM

Liked the analogy here.All things need tending or they die.Nicely done.

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-11-01 09:56 PM

Very well written analogy....I enjoyed

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