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Rico
Junior Member
since 1999-10-29
Posts 20


0 posted 1999-10-31 10:47 PM


Can a man survive without a love?
A gentle touch a soothing smile
A special dove sent from above
Who doesn't mind to stay awhile

Would his heart ache like mine?
When at length we are apart
Even the smallest measures of time
Would pierce sore like sharpened dart

Would smiles be grand when you arrive?
A warm embrace to catch up time lossed
Feeling your love to keep me alive
Without you my life's like an ocean tossed

Man can't survive without a love
Or gentle touch or soothing smile
Or special dove sent from above
Who doesn't mind to stay awhile

For this I know of my stay in time
A simple truth comes into view
That I know *my* life won't be sublime
Without your love, without you



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Bon Appetite!

© Copyright 1999 Rico - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-31 10:55 PM


Very tender and sweet, Rico. Very very nice!

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Denise


Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-02 03:56 PM


lovely...enjoyed the read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-04-25 10:27 PM


I think man can survive
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