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Open Poetry #3

I'm So Tired Let Me Sleep

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 1999-10-31 05:05 PM

I'm so tired, let me sleep
I've done so much already
Haven't I dug my hole too deep?

I'm so exhausted, let me go
I've gone so far already
Haven't I proven myself? Doesn't it show?

I'm so weak that I can't go on
I've given up trying to stay awake
Haven't I done what I needed to do; the extra mile, haven't I gone?

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-31 05:20 PM

Very good! Exactly how I feel every night!

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Denise

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

2 posted 1999-10-31 07:28 PM

Joy: You can't go to sleep cause I'm here to prod you awake..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 1999-10-31 08:05 PM

It sux doesn't it? Instead of counting sheep count people you love, it's a nice way to end the day!!

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-10-31 09:04 PM

I've felt the same way

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

5 posted 1999-11-02 04:18 PM

Know this feeling well.Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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