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DramaMama Junior Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 47Louisiana |
The Assault words that wound pounce upon my tender psyche no construction in this criticism all pomposity and righteousness donning Kevlar venturing out unarmed offering exposed flesh to the critic’s knife peeling back tender layers uncovering the visceral within pity this poem-maker her compulsive folly to assume her words could inspire @ 10-99 Pat Hornsby Crochet |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very very nice! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
WOw....take a bow for this one...wonderfully written. BRAVO!! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
good one.....do you post in deja.com too??? hehehehe they are sharks over there. I post there for the pure pleasure of being ripped to pieces. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done!!  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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