Open Poetry #3 |
Just Hold On Michael |
Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
She’ll be back, she will! I know! Deep in my heart it tells me so. Do not fret my gentle friend a love like yours just shouldn’t end. I’ll write to her and ask her why if she is gone where was goodbye? I’m sure that she will soon return through my letter, of your hurt, she’ll learn. And I will tell her its not fair to treat you like she doesn’t care. For I have emails that I’ve saved that do not mirror how she’s behaved. She claimed she loved you once or twice and the way she’s treating you isn’t nice. To make you sit with constant pain no word from her makes you insane. I’ll send the emails I have read I’ll hold her to the things she said. So please hold on a little while I’ll try to comfort you with smiles. [This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 10-02-1999).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like the poem Lucie and I like that you care enought to want to help Michael out. We do not know all the details here, but I'm sure there is a reason for what's happening.. sometimes people do things they think are best for everyone. Again, you did an excellent job here - and I like all the happy faces! |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Lucie how sweet of you to write to cheer, the smiles I'm sure will reach the miles, as your kindness shines as bright as the sun. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
So you want to fix the world? You could, too! Got a good start with cute one. Made me smile!!!!!!!!! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Too sweet! I'll add a few of my own! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Thanks Lucie, A few smiles make all the difference in the world. Thank you too Devine and chris. ------------------ Michael Anderson I could not love except where Death Was mingling his with Beauty's breath - Or Hymen, Time, and Destiny Were stalking between her and me. EAP |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hmmn, don't know how I missed this one! But anyway it is so sweet it has to back to the top! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
You're so sweet Lucie. : ) |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I have been dealing with my own issues, but still do I want you to hold on my friend. Thank you Lucie for this verse. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
couldn't do this now...we are only allowed 5 smilies |
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