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Open Poetry #3

it will be OK

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-09-30 09:50 PM

Acceptance

The immense state of being
free
from feeling
lost
finding out that all is
calm
and everything is as it should
be
for now and tomorrow
life
revolves around the
center
of this fantastic circle
rotating
on the axis of
self.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-30 10:24 PM

Nicely done!

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Denise

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

2 posted 1999-10-01 01:27 AM

Like the structure, this flows very well.

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

3 posted 1999-11-06 07:16 PM

I liked this

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 1999-11-06 07:26 PM

Another good'n it is!

Self...so true!

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

5 posted 1999-11-06 07:32 PM

Thanks Lost....you are digging in to my past posts!!!

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 1999-11-06 09:18 PM

Well, I'm glad she did. Excellent form.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

7 posted 1999-11-06 11:06 PM

Well done!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-04-25 08:47 PM

and this...I needed

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