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A Small Death
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A Small Death |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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A candle burns late in a saucer picturing a delicate lady in blue. Her smile has gone to wax, darkness settles around her stretching this room to forever. When I reach out my arm my hand is gone. Beyond my hand is the world of the desk and chair and you lost in blackness I cannot penetrate, I hear one unforgettable sigh. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I like this one! It says alot!  ------------------ Denise |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Short but very succint and vivid. strange quality that I really like a lot. Thanks. Tyson |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very nice! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Berry interestink.... oblivion and beyond....... |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I can't believe I found this hiding underneath a pile of other masterpieces down here. It's a bit damp so I'm gonna hang it up in the sunshine of Passions. Nice job really liked the read. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Sensitive and well done. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thankyou all for your comments, and Lost Dreamer thanks for hanging it out again. I got a few more back there that need airing.  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Excellent Martie! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 Oh Martie.... |
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