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Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-10-31 12:31 PM

I must confess
I’m blessed with sorrow
As cupid’s arrow
Hit my chest
It fell apart
(No not my heart--
The cupid’s arrow)

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-31 12:40 PM

This is great Master, short, sweet and cute!

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Denise

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

2 posted 1999-10-31 11:00 AM

Thanks Denise!

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

3 posted 1999-10-31 11:49 AM

I like this little short poem. Some times much can be said with just a few words. And I think you did just that.

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

4 posted 1999-10-31 03:31 PM

Thanks Ohme, that's exactly what I intended!

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

5 posted 1999-10-31 07:55 PM

Very good! Short and sweet, as they say. But it sounded more short and broken hearted! HUGS Hope it heals soon.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 1999-10-31 08:02 PM

Short, sweet but speaks volumes too. Next time I hope Cupid's arrow hit's it's mark my friend

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

7 posted 1999-10-31 09:36 PM

Brokenhearted? nahhh... It was the arrow that broke, I'm ok! Thanks everyone!

wannabe_poet
Junior Member

since 1999-10-15

Posts 36
Markham, Ontario, Canada

8 posted 1999-11-01 02:44 AM

Cute poem!!

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

9 posted 1999-11-01 08:45 AM

A hardened heart,
not marshallow.
Next time 'luck'
my good fellow. ;-)

I really liked this!

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Kitty**

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

10 posted 1999-11-02 05:37 AM

Liked this....cute!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-04-25 10:37 PM

sometimes it's a blessing yes

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