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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-10-31 12:31 PM


I must confess
I’m blessed with sorrow
As cupid’s arrow
Hit my chest
It fell apart
(No not my heart--
The cupid’s arrow)

© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-31 12:40 PM


This is great Master, short, sweet and cute!

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Denise


Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
2 posted 1999-10-31 11:00 AM


Thanks Denise!
Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
3 posted 1999-10-31 11:49 AM



I like this little short poem. Some times much can be said with just a few words. And I think you did just that.

Master
Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
4 posted 1999-10-31 03:31 PM


Thanks Ohme, that's exactly what I intended!
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 1999-10-31 07:55 PM


Very good! Short and sweet, as they say. But it sounded more short and broken hearted! HUGS Hope it heals soon.
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-10-31 08:02 PM


Short, sweet but speaks volumes too. Next time I hope Cupid's arrow hit's it's mark my friend

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
7 posted 1999-10-31 09:36 PM


Brokenhearted? nahhh... It was the arrow that broke, I'm ok! Thanks everyone!
wannabe_poet
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since 1999-10-15
Posts 36
Markham, Ontario, Canada
8 posted 1999-11-01 02:44 AM


Cute poem!!

Kitty**
Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA
9 posted 1999-11-01 08:45 AM


A hardened heart,
not marshallow.
Next time 'luck'
my good fellow. ;-)

I really liked this!

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Kitty**

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

10 posted 1999-11-02 05:37 AM


Liked this....cute!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
11 posted 2004-04-25 10:37 PM


sometimes it's a blessing yes
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