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Patrick B
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 58
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0 posted 1999-11-01 11:06 AM


This gift for you I'll never show,
To worship you from afar,
My deepest need you,ll never know,

My love is raging,like a rushing river,
It floods my life,washes my will,
Your heart the place I can't deliver,

This game I play,the way of fools,
why gamble on the impossible,
Because this game has no rules,

All I sense is you,it blocks my view,
an eclipse of the heart,
Your presence in my soul it grew,

you will never know this hidden thrill,
the secret I keep within,
I bask in rain and winter chill,

I can't tell you of this gleeful surprise,
the colors you bring to me,
The greenest sparkle you give my eyes,

for if I told you,you'd have to choose,
Sit and think,
The risk is great,I know I'd lose,

So I'll keep you here far inside,
My private lover untouched,
My painful want and need I'll hide,

You need to know you are never alone,
when you arise or sleep,
No lonely hours or heart of stone,

I'll take your pain and heal your sorrow,
watch you like an angel,
My loves forever,today,tomorrow.






[This message has been edited by Patrick B (edited 11-01-1999).]

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Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-02 05:23 AM


So heartfelt! Liked this one!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
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2 posted 2004-04-25 10:38 PM


very sweet
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