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Thunder Moomba Junior Member
since 1999-10-30
Posts 21Baldwin Park, CA, USA |
One day you'll cry for me As I cried for You. One day you'll think of me As I thought of you. One day you'll love me But I wont love you. ------------------ Jr. Rodrigo M. Daz_ |
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Justina Junior Member
since 1999-10-31
Posts 24Kansas City. MO |
Don't you hate that feeling of be un-wanted by the one you love. I totally feel you on that! Just remember, there is someone, somewhere who does deserve you! =) Justina |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Thunder Moomba....Short, simple, and straight from the heart. I understand the feeling! ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Straight from the heart alright, just look back on it as lessons learned. Never close the door completely for they might need a friend someday...  ------------------ Cast your eyes on the ocean, Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Short, sweet, not one wasted word...nicely done |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Good read! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! exactly! |
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