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Corinne
Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 1999-10-30 11:04 PM


His words sing to me
Sweet torturous song
Someone I cannot see
Ignites a flame
Forgotten so long

Envelops me
Blanket so soft, warm
Exists only in my mind
Never really reality
Writing from a snow storm
And me? You will never find

Me, I am not real
I am what your dreams hold
Tuning pitch of songs feel
Whispers in your ear?
I am you, so you would be
Me, you have been all along.

© March 1999 Corinne Bailey

© Copyright 1999 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-31 01:27 AM


This is unusal but I like it. A bit of a thinker.

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Denise


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-10-31 09:23 AM


Interesting format, I enjoyed this
Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-02 05:04 PM


Well done!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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