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redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 480
Franklin, TN

0 posted 1999-10-30 12:43 PM


If I could but take my heart
and shape it into a hand
that could reach not only distance
but time
I would surely wrap it around your soul
like a warm sea wave
and rock it gently in my love

then we would be together in the sand
and the tide would never find us
our hands and hearts would ever scatter
hiding from the sea




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Kay-lynn
**A dream is a wish your heart makes :)


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Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
1 posted 1999-10-30 12:45 PM


Stunning redwriter.....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-30 07:14 PM


Lovely love talk!

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Denise


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-10-30 07:18 PM


Lovely sentiments

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-10-30 07:28 PM


Oh can I ever relate
redwriter1
Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480
Franklin, TN
6 posted 1999-10-30 08:15 PM


thank you everyone. I didn't know if anyone would "get" it or not. But somehow, I knew hoot would (smile)
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