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Going insane |
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Verma Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 80Midlands, England |
Going insane Am I a Lad? Am I mad? Am I a queer for not drinking beer? "A pint of lager please" are the words I speak Right now is good I'm at my drinking peak. Off to the pub my legs take me, As soon as I finish at half past three. Through the doors & up to the bar, I'll drink myself stupid coz' I'm not in my car. 6 pints later I lose my discipline, Open my gob & put a pill in. Half hours passes I can no longer see, What am I doing? What have I put in me? I kid myself by going to the gym, When really I enjoy my daily sin. How long can I keep up this ongoing pain, Before the damn stuff drives me insane. This poem was one of my first. It was written when I was going through a bit of a bad phase in life…………if you know what I mean! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Yep, it sounds like it was a rough spot...well written though and you have to be a brit...*g* HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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seti@home Junior Member
since 1999-11-28
Posts 24 |
not to sure I like the word 'queer' mentioned maybe an alternative word could of been used? |
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