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Satiate & Alicat New Member
since 1999-10-21
Posts 1 |
Eternal Love -- Alicat My lover true will never die She draws her final shuddered breath Her rosy cheeks give birth to lie My Satiate dances with Death She draws her final shuddered breath Her cheeks still full of rosy hue My Satiate dances with Death She quickly cools before my view Her cheeks still full of rosy hue I know I'll never let her go She quickly cools before my view But no one ever needs to know I know I'll never let her go As she was such a pretty lass But no one ever needs to know She's underneath the table glass As she was such a pretty lass She'll stay with me until the end She's underneath the table glass And I can always play pretend She'll stay with me until the end Her rosy cheeks give birth to lie And I can always play pretend My lover true will never die My View From Down Here--Satiate He stuck me underneath the table glass Well now my friends, isn’t this just swell? I feel like a mounted and stuffed striped bass And ewww gross I think I’m starting to smell! Well now my friends, isn’t this just swell? The rosy cheeks he loves so much will bruise And ewww gross I think I’m starting to smell! It’s good that we wore the same color rouge… The rosy cheeks he loves so much will bruise My make-up he does each day without fail It’s good that we wore the same color rouge… He pays such close attention to detail My make-up he does each day without fail Death like this would only happen to me He pays such close attention to detail Certainly something I did not foresee Death like this would only happen to me All this time I thought he was such a prince Certainly something I did not foresee He’s a few fries short, I need not convince All this time I thought he was such a prince I feel like a mounted and stuffed striped bass He’s a few fries short, I need not convince He stuck me underneath the table glass Satiate & Alicat, the twitterpated twinkies |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
LOL..Liked this much!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I thoroughly enjoyed watching these come together in class. I give you both A+'s, I don't know about Nan. |
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sparrow Junior Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 33 |
Double the fun eh? It works, good read! ------------------ Sparrow Hawk Jester of http://www.scribedesigns.com/archflambeoth/ |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
I like the humor and the horror in this one.  So I'm sending it back to the top! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Challenge met in superb double fashion!! I loved these!  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Wonderful!! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This made my night! You guys are perfect for each other! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I liked these in class and even more here posted together...well done |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Very well done ! LOL, you're quite something ! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Yep this one I rember very well ! It was a lot of fun these pantoums  uhhhhh nr 25 ! LOL |
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