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Open Poetry #3

Love is Not

Thunder Moomba
Junior Member

since 1999-10-30

Posts 21
Baldwin Park, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-10-30 03:19 AM

Love is not just a function of the eyes.
Beautiful objects will, of course, inspire
Possessive urges- you need not despise
Your taste. But when the insatiable desire
Inflames you for a girl who's out of fasion,
Lacking in glamour- plain, in fact- that fire
Is genuine; that's the authentic passion.
Beauty, through, any critic can admire.

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Jr. Rodrigo M. Daz_

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-30 09:10 PM

Very good! I enjoyed this one too!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-10-31 09:01 AM

Very well spoken in wonderful rhyme and meter

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-02 05:10 PM

Enjoyed the read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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4 posted 2004-04-25 09:59 PM

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