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tori
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since 1999-06-18
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

0 posted 1999-10-29 08:32 PM


With mixed up emotions
My thoughts are to scream
To awaken from this horrible dream

I looked in the mirror tuned up the light
Was horrified, by this frightening sight
How can this happen, when will it end
OH..The excitement of meeting my friend!!

I know he's seen pictures that were bad at there worse
But here's the real deal and no time to rehearse
My closets stand empty, cloths on the bed
No sleep for a week my eyes are all red

I'm getting a pimple on the edge of my chin
Dam my luck sucks.. when will this end
I'll set up a facial, do two if I must
Maybe by friday this mountain will bust~

I've made out the menu, the music is picked
Have to hurry he's online at six!!

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On the other end of net.....

For some strange reason there's a wrench in my gut
As I turned in the mirror I noticed no butt!!
I hope that I told her the back end lay's low
I can not remember how far I did go?

I went to the dentist to have my teeth cleaned
There's a split in my eyebrow that I've never seen~
I hope she don't notice, but she probably will
That my hands are shaking and my leg wont stay still

What will she think? what will she say?
If it doesn't come up.. will she go away?
My God this is crazy, totally insane
I feel like I stepped back to twelve again...

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The meeting

He walks from the plane with a bag in his hand
This tall blue-eyed person , this incredible man
Gathering Courage from parts unknown
They run to each other, as if they were home

With tears in their eyes and fresh cleaned teeth smiles
They garbed each other and kissed for a WHILE..
The councilor was working, No spots did he see
Pleats in the pants made the backside woe-weee!!
As they held to each other and walked toward the door
They stopped for a picture Kissing some more!!

Tori 99
Tried to put this one on the lighter side..lol



[This message has been edited by tori (edited 10-29-1999).]

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Denise
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1 posted 1999-10-29 10:36 PM


Tori this is so wonderful! Both sides and then the meeting! I loved it!

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Denise


Balladeer
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2 posted 1999-10-29 11:05 PM


...and you did, Tori. Great job!!
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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3 posted 1999-10-30 12:50 PM


Tori this was really cute! I like how you put this together! Nice one!
tori
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
4 posted 1999-10-30 08:56 AM


Thanks Denise, Balladeer and Dove....

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-10-30 11:02 AM


Wow, I thought I was the only one with nothing to wear....man can I relate, I only hope my metting goes as well.
5 days now....boy am I nervous

tori
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
6 posted 1999-10-30 11:50 AM


It will Ruth !!
Upon your retrun...I think all of us at NP's will have our eyes glued to our screens as we all feel your joy and share in the excitement of this wonderful encounter, reminds me of the Visa/MC/American Express? commercials as it captures priceless moments!! I know this adventure will bring you many to convey, as well as many more you can not..lol Best of luck Ruth!


Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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7 posted 1999-10-30 12:09 PM


Great read Tori....held me captive all the way through!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

tori
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
8 posted 1999-10-30 01:01 PM


Thanks Pepper!! I was scared it would get lost .
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