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A Little Love for Some Peace of Mind
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A Little Love for Some Peace of Mind |
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just me Junior Member
since 1999-10-29
Posts 15marysville, wa USA |
Hey Mr. Moon, has baby star been interfering with your night? Is she in your dreams, is she in your mind, does she cause you any fright? Well can't you see, that baby star is afraid to be alone? Oh, Mr. Moon, if you gave her love she might call it just a loan. A little love for some peace of mind, Just shelter her from the storm. A little love she's been tryin' to find, Just someone's heart to keep her warm. Well Mr. Moon, if you walk away, You won't lose a thing at all. But from the sky, in the deep of the night, is an awful long way to fall. And baby star has her heart reached out, for you to grab a hold. Mr. Moon, do you know,in the night, the dark is very cold. And a little love for some peace of mind Isn't a very big price to pay. A little love is all she's trying to find Well, Mr. Moon, what do you say? |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
My God I love this!!! The imagery and everything really touched me. Bravo  ------------------ Cast your eyes on the ocean, Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
P.S. Not to mention the subtleties ( I think I spelled that wrong  ) Great job ------------------ Cast your eyes on the ocean, Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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just me Junior Member
since 1999-10-29
Posts 15marysville, wa USA |
Why thankyou Isis. My children love all my poems about Mr. Moon and Baby Star. But then they are a little prejudice. This site is the best thing I have found in my life for a long, long time. I think I'm in LOVE!! HA! HA! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Brilliant... HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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