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Hoping you know who you are
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Hoping you know who you are |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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Its not those blue eyes That make my heart melt But flattering words You told me, I felt. Not very often Are they words that I hear When you say them to me My eyes start to tear It's my great weakness Those words I long for My heart opens wide My mind shuts the door Thoughts that I'm having Don't know that I should If I could explain You know that I would. It's quite confusing The way that I feel Your words they mean much They have great appeal Those flattering words I know to beware Can't seem to help it They just draw me near I want to reach out Run into your arms I know if I did It might cause much harm I can't seem to stop My thoughts are of you I push them away They still come back through I know these feelings Come cuz what I've lacked Don't want to scare you Just can't turn my back My face lights right up When you come on line You make me feel special Most all of the time Think I will stop Don't know what to say Cept that I'm hoping You don't run away |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a nice expression of your feelings Whtdove. I think this person is good for you to have around  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Who is it WhtDove? You got my curiousity going. Beware, look what happened for me. Great poem. Hope to talk to you soon. ------------------ Cast your eyes on the ocean, Cast your soul to the sea, When the dark nights seem endless, Please remember me. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you Hoot! You're so sweet! I like to have this person around. Isis, sorry I will not tell! Hope to talk to you soon too! Thank you [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 10-29-1999).] |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Well now Dove I know why my cyber farewell sparked you to tears..Hum... This was absolutely beautiful my friend, and if you get a chance go read my reply to you on Cyber Farewell.. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
very nice!!!! well explains your feelings ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Tori what can I say? I will go read that reply. Thanks my friend! Thank you for your wonderful comment! Thank you Robert, glad to see your back again. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Great poem, Dovey. We all like to be acknowledged for our qualities and it is natural to feel close to those who take the time to do so. You have many, which shows in your poetry and your sincerity. If there is someone who makes you feel good by pointing out the good things about you, there's no need to take action. Simply enjoy the fortune to have a good friend. If you feel this person is trying to take advantage of you, run for your life. But many friendships have been formed here at Passions. This could be one. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, WhtDove. Kind words can do so much! ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Balladeer thank you! Thank you for your kind words buddy! I always appreciate them! Denise thanks to you also. Yes, kind words can do much! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This is a lovely poem, WhtDove. It is amazing the flurry of emotion that can overwhelm us from someone saying just the right words to you, almost as if they reach down into your soul. Beautifully done, you have captured the moment with this one. ------------------ Michael Anderson And after-drunkeness of soul Succeeds the glory of the bowl - An idle longing night and day To dream my very life away EAP |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Magnificent! And who says you can't feel for someone you've never met? The hert and mind of a person are what's important, and I can see you recognize that! HUGS! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you Michael! I'm at a loss for words with all your comments, everyones. They all are sweet words and ever so kind. Christopher yes we can. Though it's a wonderful friendship! Thank you all so much, you really are so sweet and understanding! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lovely, WhtDove... |
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