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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-10-29 05:33 PM

Not to be taken seriously A Three-Act Play

My wife directs my life like a three-act play,
My rise, my sleeping and the rest of my day.
Its rise shower shave and a list in her hand,
Not a demand, it goes with the wedding band.

But try as I may I can't do things right,
From the moment of rise to the dark of night.
It seems she has plans on every behalf,
When I think of act three, it's a hardy laugh.

Act three is when she allows us to bed.
But before we sleep a question is said.
And my mind races to answer her soar,
When back comes a snort from a definite snore.

I can't rightly say how the rest of you fend,
I'm sure you have felt a similar end.
Women are still an enigma to me,
If god would it different, he'd hand us a key.

I could never figure their mind or rational
I don't feel a husband, just a hanging fal-lal.

Sunshine

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1 posted 1999-10-29 05:35 PM

you're add chuckles to my afternoon...

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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2 posted 1999-10-29 09:23 PM

hehehehehehe...funny one Seymour!

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Denise

Martie

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3 posted 1999-10-29 09:27 PM

This was great Seymour. Thanks for the smiles.

Balladeer

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4 posted 1999-10-29 09:48 PM

Just hard to figure out sometimes if they are comedies or tragedies, SY. Guess that's why we have threepenny operas and two-bit performances! Oh, well. The show must go on! Good work,

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-10-29 09:53 PM

Seymore....there are just some things men weren't supposed to know

Hey maybe Eve learned them all when she ate that apple

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 1999-10-29 11:21 PM

Sunshine,
A smile or a chuckle is good.
Denise,
Glad you enjoyed the muse.
Martie,
A smile is always good.
Balladeer,
I think they are both.
Hoot,
I think you are right.

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

7 posted 1999-11-02 06:18 PM

Well done!! Enjoyed this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Craig
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since 1999-06-10

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8 posted 1999-11-07 03:33 PM

Well worth another visit to the top!!

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Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 1999-11-07 06:43 PM

Watcher,
Never expected to see this one again, thanks for the well dodne.
Craig,
Thanks for the reboot.

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