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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 1999-11-07 02:54 AM


I am the last snow flake to fall with early spring-
And the last old goose in winter to take wing.
I’m the lone wolf of the wild, who’s grown too old-
To forage, so I perish in the cold.

I’m the last faint twinkle in a dimming eye-
Of an old man, when it comes his time to die.
I’m the last tear drop of every broken heart-
I’m the first step of the ones who never start.

I am the residue of everything that’s good-
The ashes of a structure which once stood...
I’m the broken vows which never seem to last..
I guess I am the ghost of Christmas past.

I’m the sound which falls on every deafened ear-
And to the blind the vision so unclear....
I’m billows found upon the placid sea-
In a word, I guess you’d say that I am ME!

© Copyright 1999 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
1 posted 1999-11-07 03:00 AM


*G*, Gunslinger, I liked this...a lot. : )
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-07 05:10 AM


Enjoyed this much! Well done!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Craig
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since 1999-06-10
Posts 444

3 posted 1999-11-07 03:30 PM


Great poem, what's it doing down here it needs to be up there where everyone can see it!!

Craig

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Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-11-07 06:01 PM


Very nice!

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Denise


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