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Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-10-29 01:04 PM

Crazy man he is
He's killing in the garden
Bloodying flowers

Smell the guilty breeze
He steals virgin innocence
Bloodies the flowers

Please make daddy stop
Dirtying my garden, In
The bloody flowers

~This was written after I hear a tale of rape on young girls that is absolutely horrifying. Lost innocence is a tragic thing. ~

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

1 posted 1999-10-29 03:49 PM

A most disturbing image.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-10-30 05:53 PM

I am glad the tale inspired you, my friend. I am myself penning the tale in it's entirety, in both verse and prose for those that wish to become aware of the warning signs. I plan to post them just after my move.

Thank you Sys, for giving me your ear and for crafting such verse.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

3 posted 1999-10-30 06:00 PM

and the punishment never fits the crime..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 1999-10-30 06:25 PM

What punishment WOULD fit the crime, only castration I think. Great poem though, so much for little souls to endure

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-10-30 07:23 PM

Very tramatic, very well put.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

6 posted 1999-10-30 08:25 PM

Thank you everyone, for your replies. And thank you Dream, for sharing the story. Can't wait to erad your version of it.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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