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Lee Benthin Junior Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 19Marysville, WA USA |
Thankyou for your affection Your loving, your attention. Thankyou for my new dreams By the way did I mention? I love you, I love you, I love you for who you are. Take a moment to believe me This is the way love should be. Together, Forever. Surrender. Your heart now belongs to me. I love you, I love you, I love you for who we are. And who we are, we are lovers. And who we are is best of friends. For us there are no others, Our love is where the searching ends. So... Thankyou for your affection Your, loving, your attention. Thankyou for my new dreams By the way did I mention? I love you. I love you. I love you for who we are. |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
GREAT! Very lyrical. Is this, by chance, a song? You are a love-loving person, are you not? Keep writing and let me see some more of that stuff! ------------------ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lee, Catching and I enjoyed the read. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enjoyed this much! Nicely done!  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely and sweet, Lee. I enjoyed reading this! ------------------ Denise |
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