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Forever my love
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Forever my love |
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Patrick B Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 58uk |
When do you know that love has died? When she say's goodbye and your heart shivers? Or when she tell's you of her love and you know she lied? Is it the coldness of the night that stays? Is it the tears that trickle down your face? Or the painfully long,lonely days? Is it when the sun turns to cloud and rain? Or when the warmth turns to cold and pain? I would have loved you forever my love, I would have let your heart soar to the sky, Two souls gliding like the wings of a dove, You stole my heart and I could never love another, My life is barren,my soul in grief, You were my smile,my music,my wonderful lover. I will love you until my body joins my heart in death. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nicely done, Patrick. And very touching. ------------------ Denise |
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