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What Makes You Think? |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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What makes you think you are the best, the proverbial bag of chips? You make me sick with all the lies that pass between your lips. You said you were the one for me.. like you are all there is. And just because he isn’t here doesn’t mean that I’m not his. I’m married.. don’t you get it.. honey you don’t turn me on. Many men just like you have been here, but now their gone. When I stood up and took those vows I meant just what I said. And believe me there is more to life then what you find in bed. You swear a woman can not live without the touch of man well I am here to tell you dear you’ve met the one who can. I do not need a man to make me feel like I’m complete. And I also do not feel the need to sleep with all I meet. I have many male friends whom have never seen my bed and sweetheart you won’t either so just get it through your head. Men like you are a dime a dozen and all your lines are played. So move along my brother.. cause your not gettin laid. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well Lucie, you probably just broke the hearts of half the men in the forum *hehe*...great poem anyway. Michael [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 10-02-1999).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It doesn't get said any straighter than that, Lucie. Beats the hell out of "I have a headache" for sure. Nobody can lay down the law better then you, girl...and it is very well written. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
I doubt that Michael.. everyone is in love with someone in here..heheh Ha Ha Balladeer, after two years I don't think I'll ever have another headache for the rest of life..  [This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 10-02-1999).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
you go girl....Bravo!! ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
BRAVO!!!!!! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
Dropped that hammer again, didn't ya! Ha...I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You Go Lucie... For Your Eyes ONLY (Just because most of the rest have read it already - don't want to bore you.. )[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 10-03-1999).] |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Ditto! ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Thanks for the great replies.. And thanks for the link Nan.. hadn't seen it before.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehe...I need to send this to a few of my male aquaintences |
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