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Rico Junior Member
since 1999-10-29
Posts 20 |
One look at you my eyes no longer blink My composure slips and I struggle to think My throat: bone dry I need something to drink My love, My heart, as sweet as can be You have an amazing affect on me As you walk towards me, my butterflies flutter When you arrive my speech turns to studder I try and try but "hi" just won't utter My love, My heart, as sweet as can be You have an amazing affect on me Briefly though, you have to leave As you are going away I can't believe That my time and attention you gladly recieve My love, My heart, as sweet as can be You have an amazing affect on me |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much!! Nicely done  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so sweet, Rico! I enjoyed this very much! ------------------ Denise |
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