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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
if you look into the darkest soul does it make you any less cold i think not so i no longer care to glance impale your own heart tragic dance you and it making testimonies excuses apologies for the way things are protect your powers that be for green paper the patience to kill i no longer concern myself with your damn will.. lie to others this fool has regained sight you are the reptile leather bills suitcase of gold still means you leave this place all alone.. ------------------ |
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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
of course you know that i've liked all your poetry, but what i liked about this one was the way you wrote. you are so angry in this and it clearly and cleverly comes through. my favorite parts were the beginning where you wrote "impale your own heart" and the end, your sublime "still means that you leave this place alone", really brought the whole thing together. good poem |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
wow..I loved this one!! good job. ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I have read almost all of the work you have posted here. I must apologize for not posting replies all the time. I am a great admirer of your talent. Please keep them coming. |
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