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Corinne
Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 1999-10-28 09:19 PM


Rocks and River

It happens when we’re sleeping
Focused thoughts come into view
Gentle spirits call a meeting
A place where we pass through

Where mighty rushing rivers flow
Green landscapes burgeoning
And indigo dog violets grow
Patience and love harvesting

You, the stream flowing
I, the shape of stability
Growing, never plateauing
Wearing me smooth, subtly

At times nature tears us apart
She regards us with suspicion
Leaving us with wounded hearts
To renew love sans inhibition

Thoughts pouring onto each other
Repeating rhythms brimming over
Holding forth on terra firma
Fluid and solid, rocks and river

(c) 1999 CM Bailey


© Copyright 1999 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-10-28 09:23 PM


Wow Corrinne, this is great. Welcome to Passions
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 1999-10-28 09:23 PM


Corinne,
Well done I really enjoyed the read

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-28 09:29 PM


Liked this much!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-10-28 09:34 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, Corinne! Welcome to Passions!

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Denise


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