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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-10-01 10:30 PM


Blended Woman


She is all
though not enough
and everything
in the middle
of artistry
and life.
She has spectral
intuitions
universal in proportions
and knows before
I ever see it.
This blended woman
of many colors
and attitudes
takes me
beyond thinking
to the edge
of feelings
and back to where
I am being…..
leaving me wanting
though never asking
for more.


RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

© Copyright 1999 RobertB - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218
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1 posted 1999-10-01 10:38 PM


Well Robert, if this is what comes to you, keep it coming! I really like this a lot. You express yourself beautifully
By the way, excellent choice for your title!
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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

[This message has been edited by caroline (edited 10-01-1999).]

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 1999-10-01 10:39 PM


Creative and beautiful...well written!
RobertB
Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
3 posted 1999-10-01 10:40 PM


yep...this is what comes to me.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
4 posted 1999-10-01 10:45 PM


Very lovely, Robert - Keep 'em coming...
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-10-01 10:45 PM


I'm beginning to enjoy your craft more and more with each posted piece, wonderful job on this one and incase I haven't already said it....Welcome to passions

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.

Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
6 posted 1999-10-01 10:52 PM


sigh......this is too beautiful Robert............

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
7 posted 1999-10-02 03:44 PM


By lamplight
or daylight
or sun's light
bring us more
day or night.

Beautiful!

RobertB
Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
8 posted 1999-10-03 05:10 PM


I have many more....I just can't decide which is best.....

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

RainbowGirl
Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
9 posted 1999-10-03 05:21 PM


I'm echoing all of the above...

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


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