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Open Poetry #3

Out of the Blue

Lori
Junior Member

since 1999-10-28

Posts 11
Pulaski,Tn. USA

0 posted 1999-10-28 10:03 AM

My soul searches and wants to fly,
I raise my hands,
Yet I could not reach.
Even though I tried.

Out of the blue,
Like a clue.
You came and lifted me up.

I feel like we have met before,
We seek to know each other more & more.
Across the miles,
A distance away.

I find myself thinking of you,
Throughout the day.
Then as nightfall darkens the sky,
Moon rises as I watch with my eyes.

I blow you a tender kiss,
Carries with the wind.
To let you know, from me to you.
How much your truly missed.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 1999-10-28 10:05 AM

I like this, Lori... Welcome!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-10-28 08:14 PM

I can relate to this one

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-28 08:22 PM

Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Lori
Junior Member

since 1999-10-28

Posts 11
Pulaski,Tn. USA

4 posted 1999-10-28 08:32 PM

Thank you, was kinda scared to put poems on here...but also would like to be told if something is wrong with them..always room for improvement.
I just enjoy writing.

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