just confused and half crazy i suppose

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Open Poetry #3

just confused and half crazy i suppose

amber
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

0 posted 1999-10-27 02:38 AM

i wonder if your an angel,
that hasnt quite found its place,
coming to comfort me now,
with a long lost fathers grace.

its been such a long time,
so i welcome you in my dreams,
but the things you say hurt me so,
because i understand what they mean.

i know that you watch over us,
my family, my sister and i,
your sorry about the past,
and that you left your baby duaghters behind.

you dont speak about your death,
or maybe i just block it out,
because i dont want to know,
why your here, and what its all about.

ive heard of guardian angels,
and i believe your mine,
because youve chose to comfort me,
after all this absent time.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-27 02:41 AM

Sad and touching! Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

PhaerieChild
Senior Member

since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

2 posted 1999-10-27 03:42 AM

Amber, this is very well written...even though sad it has a poignant hope to it.

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

[This message has been edited by WildChild (edited 10-27-1999).]

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

3 posted 1999-10-27 04:19 AM

Wow Amber... this calls out with a hope and saddness that are palpable!
Well done on expressing yourself!

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

4 posted 1999-10-27 05:54 AM

I like this, Amber

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-10-27 08:46 AM

SO sad

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