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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 1999-10-26 03:35 AM


im sittin way off in the corner
writin verse on my ankle skin
im hidin from humanity
dont know if ill be back agin

i stole a coat hangar from my straght jacket
yeah they hang those things some how
theres a bloody mess in the corner
and my ankle aint so white right now

im standing next to the padding
carving verse rather madening
i know that didnt ryhme but i dont care
after all im just droolin
writin words on the padding
in my longjohn straight jacket underwear

© Copyright 1999 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 1999-10-26 03:36 AM


Cute one walt.

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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 1999-10-26 03:37 AM


ROFL!!
I'd be scared to go to sleep then!

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-26 03:42 AM


LOL.....well done!!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Nan
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4 posted 1999-10-26 06:58 AM


I'm glad to see you posting, walt - I'm not deleting - nope - not me...
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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5 posted 1999-10-26 07:10 AM


hehehe I liked this

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Saxoness
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6 posted 1999-10-26 10:30 AM


Good one, Walt

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
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Texas
7 posted 1999-10-26 10:34 AM


Walt, even if I could, I would't delete this one. I like it!
tori
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8 posted 1999-10-26 10:40 AM


Can I ask ya to loan me the jacket Walt?
I have an outfit that it will go with !

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
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Virginia
9 posted 1999-10-26 11:58 AM


Hey Walt! Where've you been? Love this rhyme, for sure! You're not one of those Passions 'stute people are you? Justin Kace you were, I thought I'd ask.

Seriously, this is an interesting poem and I'm glad to see you posting again. Haven't seen you around for a while.

Denise
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10 posted 1999-10-26 10:16 PM


I needed a laugh! Thank you!

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Denise

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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11 posted 1999-10-26 10:19 PM


Scary thought bout your ankle their! Good one! Now why would ya want to delete this? I dunno! Unique it is!
starchild
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since 1999-10-22
Posts 59
manchester, england
12 posted 1999-10-27 08:04 AM


yep yep yep it is raining in there isn't it?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Scarlet pimpernel
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since 1999-10-27
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Birkenhead,Wirral,England
13 posted 1999-10-27 08:39 AM


Love the title. Its a good one.
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