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** Baby Angel Girl **
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** Baby Angel Girl ** |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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Once upon a time - - there lived a tiny soul she blossomed like a star her presence made me whole. To know she grew inside my deepest inner core to keep her safe & warm forever, this I swore. 3 months came & went was August twenty-eight her tiny heart was still by then, it was too late. The doctor rushed me in and did a sonogram on the screen I saw her - my precious little lamb... She lay so very still as if she were asleep I wanted her to move my heart began to weep. The doctor shook his head he said, "Your baby's gone"... "We'll have to take her now - this won't take very long." I held my belly tight I wanted her to stay "Please don't take her from me." Is all that I could say. When I came to - that night I knew that she was gone I couldn't keep her warm I wondered what went wrong? I cried & cried & cried - & asked my Saviour why my precious little lamb had to go and die? The timing wasn't right she knew she had to go - she has a place in Heaven where she can play & grow. I'm sure that there's an angel who keeps her safe & sound I know she knows I love her - I feel her all around. My baby angel girl Now has her tiny wings... She waits for me in Heaven and while she waits - she sings......... ~~ To my Baby Angel Girl...Laisha Denea... ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
this is such a beautiful poem, and i know what strength it must have taken to write it. i wish you all the warmth in the world, but know that no words can bring that to you. i hold you in my thoughts, and im am very sorry for you. agian, a beautiful poem, they always are when you put your entire heart into them. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
And you shall be with her in heaven, Dear, don't ever doubt that. This is so sad, I wish I could just reach out and hold you right now. My heart is with you...wonderful, wonderful poem. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Loving Tribute to one here for so short a time *Hugs* ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
WoW! This is terrible, tragic, beautiful and alost made me cry! I feel for you G... no one should have to deal with so much pain. I am awed by your grace and strength in looking at the "bright" side of this loss. A heart wrencher friend. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I must thank you dear Lady for penning something able to wrench emotion from me this night. I would have preferred something pleasant, but this feels more like home than joy could have. This is a wonderfully woven slice of soul that speaks volumes of how knowing you can enrich the lives of those who name you a friend and those you name as friends yourself. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I'm glad that you could take a sad  event and give it hope  . Very pretty poem, Femme |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
I know there are things we have never talked about and possibly never will, Gennifer. But thank you for sharing this piece. It brought a tear to my eye. I can only hope that when I find the strength to write about my Dad that it will be as well put. You have my ear and my shoulder, Sis. ------------------ No matter where you go, somebody's probably already been there and gotten the parking space... |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Gennifer,Your sweet little Angel sings to a choir of larger angels,and you will meet again in Heaven. Bless you. Jenny |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Gennifer...what a wonderful tribute to your daughter. This is so tragic and so touching. Your angel waits for you and some day you shall hold her in your arms |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Simple hugs here, my friend. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Femme, thank you for talking with me about this last night. I am so glad you are able now to speak of the hurts you harbored so long. I love you, and i'm holding you in my thoughts and prayers. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
PFF, this was a truly beautiful, heartbreaking poem. I'm so sorry to hear about your daughter. Hugs, ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Femme this was so beautifully written! I'm really sorry to hear of your loss. I know it must be really hard. Some are just to good to go through this world. She was one of them. God Bless you, I hope you heal from this tragedy. I know you will it will take time. Rest assured you will see her again. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The angels that watch over your daughter will help heal you also. Blessings. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So sad to endure. No pain is greater than losing a child. You will see her again, and now when you need her, just listen to hear her sing. Beautifully and sad piece. (HUGS) from across the sea, one mother to another... ------------------ Cast your eyes on the ocean, Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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