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Open Poetry #3

Last Glance!

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-10-25 07:22 PM

Last Glance!

He was 24,
and I, was but 15.
My love for him was
stronger than steel.

But it would never
work out for the good.
Too many complaints,
from both families.

We saw each other
two days ago.
Both with someone
new on our arm.

We just simply looked
at each other
and kept walking
in different directions.

But we both looked
back, and took one
more glance, hoping
it was the last.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 1999-10-25 08:46 PM

Sorry that things didn't work out for you, Lynn, but best of luck to you in the future. Your poem told the situation well.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

2 posted 1999-10-25 08:53 PM

Thanks for sharing this piece Lynn.
Enjoyed the read!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-25 10:26 PM

Very sad

but very well done.

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Denise

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-10-26 04:45 AM

Nicely done. So sad

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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